Comments on: Research Portfolio Essay #9 http://laurenorsini.wordpress.com/2006/11/22/research-portfolio-essay-9/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Tue, 02 Jun 2009 11:38:26 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: mlabbe http://laurenorsini.wordpress.com/2006/11/22/research-portfolio-essay-9/#comment-13 mlabbe Sun, 10 Dec 2006 15:22:29 +0000 http://laurenorsini.wordpress.com/2006/11/22/research-portfolio-essay-9/#comment-13 I caught a few small things in your third paragraph-- I would hyphenate "power wielding" in the first sentence and "foreign born" in the sixth sentence. Your summary is good, but your evaluation is very short. Is there anything else you can say about why you agree with her argument? I caught a few small things in your third paragraph– I would hyphenate “power wielding” in the first sentence and “foreign born” in the sixth sentence.

Your summary is good, but your evaluation is very short. Is there anything else you can say about why you agree with her argument?

]]> By: edowney http://laurenorsini.wordpress.com/2006/11/22/research-portfolio-essay-9/#comment-10 edowney Fri, 08 Dec 2006 11:00:43 +0000 http://laurenorsini.wordpress.com/2006/11/22/research-portfolio-essay-9/#comment-10 I think this is a great review. Nothing caught my eye with regard to grammar/punctuation errors. I think this is a great review. Nothing caught my eye with regard to grammar/punctuation errors.

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